seeko29's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beardo World]

I'm not sure what to say here, the animation is smooth at last, so good job with that, but I wasn't sure what was going on, why and how, did the stickman change his head? Overall, you just need a story people can understand, i'm sure you can do better next time.

NoYouAre2006 responds:

Thank you for the critique
Honestly idk what's going on either I just have some old random animations and am posting them here
Basically the entire background is made up of that face the stickman transforms into

[My first rough pass ever]

Neat stuff you got here, I would like to see a full animation in full color, as for the animation itself, I think it was done well, just maybe make cam cut less jarring, and you would be good to go.

[OneyPlays: What Does This Symbolize?]

Interesting stuff.

Thetageist responds:

Thanks!

[Master with stick]

Smooth animation, and nice fight moves, but come on man, they didn't even do anything to you, they were just chilling!

[Manatee]

This was kind of wholesome.
As for animation, it was smooth, nice work with that. Try making this a gif in the art portal as well. A background would also be neat.

YukiSenmatsu responds:

tysm, and thankfully I already have a gif of this.

Adding a background will be no problem since not only I still have the original CLIP file, but there may be a few tweaks after learning some stuff on what CSP can do when it comes to that

[Meaningless animation]

The art was okay, I kinda like it, as for animation, it was just one (or was it two? Ah, who knows.) characters moving, however, the animation was kind of smooth, so points for that.

QTanimationz responds:

THANK U SO MUCH I SENT THIS VID TO MY FAMILY AND THEY SAID NOTHING
:)

[Fill in (Animated Short film)]

The art kinda needs some work, the buildings are neat tho.
As for the story, I wasn't sure on what was happening half the time. I guess the stickfigure got his girl and the end, but the at the first 7 seconds, I was already kinda confused, like, why were stick figures dancing in mid-air? Why are there gears? The animation itself was alright, however, try making a story that your viewers can understand, overall, you can do better next time. Oh, and by the way, if the music is from the radio, you need to change it, cuz' Newgrounds can't host that kind of stuff.

TL;DR: Art kinda needs some work, the story needs to be understood, and you might need to change the music if it's from the radio.

Zootzie responds:

Song was created by me i preciate the criticism its my first of many 2 come

[Diamondman (2023)]

Not bad, the walking animation could be a bit more slower and smoother, if the music is from the radio, It needs to be changed, cuz' Newgrounds can't host that sort of stuff.
Overall, this is not a bad submission, It's kinda cool that this was made in Scratch. Neat stuff @Diamondmanpixel76!

Diamondmanpixel76 responds:

Don't worry, the music is from NoCopyrightSounds, and I made sure to give credit. Thanks for the review!

[Funny Space]

Imagine the news headline for this man.

[Stan and Kyle Fight Part 1 [Low Res]]

So, I don't know what say here, other than that the screen is more smaller, and that make the movie somehow nicer to watch, so, uh, yeah, that's all.

IamannpcIswear responds:

Thanks for your kind responses on my games thank you