seeko29's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Entry for the Sketch Collab 23]

Very smooth, however, the details and movement in the punch need some work.

DoubleItch responds:

yeah true

[Comfert food]

Nice stuff dude, and great work with the animation and colors.

notarobot1126 responds:

Thank you so much dude!

[pizza tower scream meme but doom]

Huh? I don't think I knew what what going on.

DoubleItch responds:

have you seen the original meme? if not then yeah this wouldn't make sense.
And even then it probably wont make much sense.

[Danish clock says happy clock day]

Not bad, I kinda liked the animation, and happy Clock day!

VernerDurlev responds:

Thx

[Beardo World]

I'm not sure what to say here, the animation is smooth at last, so good job with that, but I wasn't sure what was going on, why and how, did the stickman change his head? Overall, you just need a story people can understand, i'm sure you can do better next time.

NoYouAre2006 responds:

Thank you for the critique
Honestly idk what's going on either I just have some old random animations and am posting them here
Basically the entire background is made up of that face the stickman transforms into

[OneyPlays: What Does This Symbolize?]

Interesting stuff.

Thetageist responds:

Thanks!

[Manatee]

This was kind of wholesome.
As for animation, it was smooth, nice work with that. Try making this a gif in the art portal as well. A background would also be neat.

YukiSenmatsu responds:

tysm, and thankfully I already have a gif of this.

Adding a background will be no problem since not only I still have the original CLIP file, but there may be a few tweaks after learning some stuff on what CSP can do when it comes to that

[Meaningless animation]

The art was okay, I kinda like it, as for animation, it was just one (or was it two? Ah, who knows.) characters moving, however, the animation was kind of smooth, so points for that.

QTanimationz responds:

THANK U SO MUCH I SENT THIS VID TO MY FAMILY AND THEY SAID NOTHING
:)

[Fill in (Animated Short film)]

The art kinda needs some work, the buildings are neat tho.
As for the story, I wasn't sure on what was happening half the time. I guess the stickfigure got his girl and the end, but the at the first 7 seconds, I was already kinda confused, like, why were stick figures dancing in mid-air? Why are there gears? The animation itself was alright, however, try making a story that your viewers can understand, overall, you can do better next time. Oh, and by the way, if the music is from the radio, you need to change it, cuz' Newgrounds can't host that kind of stuff.

TL;DR: Art kinda needs some work, the story needs to be understood, and you might need to change the music if it's from the radio.

Zootzie responds:

Song was created by me i preciate the criticism its my first of many 2 come

[Diamondman (2023)]

Not bad, the walking animation could be a bit more slower and smoother, if the music is from the radio, It needs to be changed, cuz' Newgrounds can't host that sort of stuff.
Overall, this is not a bad submission, It's kinda cool that this was made in Scratch. Neat stuff @Diamondmanpixel76!

Diamondmanpixel76 responds:

Don't worry, the music is from NoCopyrightSounds, and I made sure to give credit. Thanks for the review!